From Afar Poem by Seamus O' Brian

From Afar

Rating: 5.0


Whatever ink cartographers wield
to tease the ridge of a mountain
from the ambient edge of the sky
puddles under the cleats of my son
as he fords the distance between
Osiris and Icarus
between the eye-lidded horizon
of a father's consternation
and the projectiled release
of a clay pigeon rising.

If you stretched a bowline
from the cleat of Sydney's harbor
to the red rock's ascent above
the pulsing rib-caged womb
of a continent, you'd transect
the yesterday of a footprint unpressed
upon a Blue Mountain unimagined
when I rummaged through his eye
and found a man with a ticket
to tomorrow.

From Afar
Wednesday, March 6, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: son,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebecca Navarre 01 August 2021

Such beautiful heart and soul meet together in this! .. Ever so inspiring! .. Definite 5 Stars! ...+++++

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 May 2019

Wowww as u picture your son with dreams of his future and you watching his life unfold, you express and relate the feel awesomely in great poetic eloquence. I liked the mention of Icarus to the features. Kudos. Pls plz do review/ comment my newest poem too, titled, " Llama drama ' maybe it will give u a chuckle..

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 March 2019

Very nice and a meaningful write. Enjoyed. Thanks for posting.

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