From Pocket Poetries No.1 Poem by alborz khansari

From Pocket Poetries No.1

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The ocean chanted her song
And waited for mine.
But I did not have any.
I'd only come to watch.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 29 July 2009

nice poem....keep writing.....

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Ninya Zulueta 29 July 2009

i know not so much though, but it puzzled me like haikus do. its beautiful and i think youre so smart.

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Ejaz Khan 29 July 2009

A nice short poem, liked it!

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Don Mcwilliams 04 March 2008

Very beautiful, Alborz, with multiple layers of meaning contained in these few lines. Don

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Fatemeh Iravani 04 March 2008

I enjoyed reading through this modern short poem. It gives me a good feeling of natural eastern taste. I do hope to see more and more poems by this good and tasteful poet. Awaiting for your new poems, Fatemeh,

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Tehran, Iran
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