Frozen Poem by Arwen Lee CW

Frozen

Rating: 2.6


I can't see your heart and you can't see min
Nor can I feel the ardour that once was divine
Flowers of the promises fall in the frost
Whip of doubt strikes down the trust
If everything's gone and no longer exist
Why is the plainness of ache still persist
Stuck in the middle od the present and the past
Be my savior before everything comes to the last.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 20 November 2008

a touching prayer...the last lines really penetrate...well written piece, Arwen...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 21 September 2008

Really a beautiful poem, nicely bloomed. Love it.

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Manonton Dalan 20 September 2008

remnants of loving feeling creeps when you are not busy. nice poem.md

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Arwen Lee CW

Arwen Lee CW

Kuantan, Malaysia
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