Funny Drinks Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Funny Drinks

Rating: 5.0


exhaustion fell on this dread,
like mold on these piano keys,
it stunk up the place, still i had
to investigate this electrical
storm, untill i at least isolate
this despondent dyke from killing
itself, and she cries becouse the
cows have no milk,
or the chords have no sound,
or this rain provides no drink.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 12 January 2007

David, your recent ramp-up in more lucid dipiction of your awesomely unique style is like flies to the flypaper....Solid penning, my friend, as so many others on this site appear to be acknowledgeing... frank

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Alice Vedral Rivera 12 January 2007

I really like this one - very interesting imaging. avr

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Raynette Eitel 12 January 2007

Interesting little gem, David...I especially liked the first two lines. Raynette

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Goldy Locks 12 January 2007

awww yeah! sweet one, David. or/or was a great close. ~~sjg

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