Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 213 Points (India)

Gaps - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

Gaps remain.Alas! In gaps
Flying wishes forgetting to fly fall.
Desires soldering dreams suddenly stall.

Gaps remain.Alas! In gaps
Mind recoiling goes to slumber deep
Virtue's traded for vice always cheap.

Gaps remain.Alas! In gaps
denied Justice wisdom helplessly wilts.
Flag upholding the faith on truth alas! tilts.




© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved. 


Comments about Gaps by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Rookie - 0 Points Allen Steble (3/2/2009 6:53:00 AM)

    alas very nice piece, poem holds a nice theme and flow, short and easy to read :) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie quercus : I've never got paid for my hits... (2/27/2009 5:23:00 PM)

    'gaps remain', but can be filled, so they'll cease to exist...
    It all depends on making the right choices...
    Excellent, thoughtful write... thank you so much for sharing :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nayyar Shabbir Ahmad (2/27/2009 2:15:00 PM)

    DEAR PA; AS - OF THE 20 [POEMS I'VE READ I LIKE 'GAPS' THE BEST VERY ORIGINAL AND THOUGHT PROVOKING. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (2/24/2009 3:45:00 AM)

    gaps in aweareness, consciousness, in thoughts and actions- gaps exist in everything. gaps, or blankness due to numbness.... very thought provoking poem- as always presentation unique...



    mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (2/23/2009 4:21:00 AM)

    gaps exist almost in everything........Thanks for sharing this wonderful and unique theme...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (2/20/2009 8:51:00 AM)

    Thought provoking. Great images. I welcome the idea of reading poems from a poet form India. It will help me know more about that country and its customs. Your perspective of life is different and consequently very helpful to me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gi Galen (2/20/2009 2:27:00 AM)

    Pleasant ”deepening” by philosophical accent... /10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Andrew Blakemore (2/16/2009 4:11:00 PM)

    A great poem as always Palas, a very well written piece. Best wishes, Andrew (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 16, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, June 6, 2014


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