Give Me Sunshine Poem by Aimanu B. Ali

Give Me Sunshine

Rating: 3.5


A heaviness persists on my soul
like a foggy curtain in January morning.
Give me a little sunshine,
the sun refuses to rise in my sky
and clear the morning fog.

My soul feels stranded,
like a car in the middle of the road
in the heavy downpour of the summer rain.

Dragging my soul like a paralytic foot
I am a living corpse.
I am the lonely Crusoe
marooned in some solitary island.
while the sea of crowd around me swarm with life
I look on with longing in my eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharti Chandwani 03 October 2013

artistic writing..........good...

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 06 November 2012

Sad but d allegory n metaphor is commendable in d poem! Cheer up n kudos poetess. Do read mine too.

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