Lonely painful nights
Bringing fears and frights
Not finding you near me
Breaks me apart slowly
As tear roll down
My senses drown
Gloom descends on my heart
I cant ever see a fresh start
A fog of depression around
Pushing me lower to the ground
The fragrance that is specially you
Play games in my mind all anew,
Wrenching my heart Is an aching need
To feel your body as i so often did
I reach out for you, to touch
but don't find within reach
Realisation dawns & in its tow
My heart dips down in sorrow
You are just an illusion
My nerves are in confusion
My heart mourns & is silent
Soul grieving hear its lament
For In this slow death my love
Nothing can & will affect me now
As my senses are hurt & bruised
By you my love is crushed
My love lies in acute dearth
And I die a slow death.
© Aarzoo Mehek.
A very nice penned piece explaining sadly love and yearning it. I liked it. Thank you for sharing, Aarzoo.
A fog of depression! But, not with too much drink; hoping to wake up and to be stronger once again. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
You are just an illusion My nerves are in confusion My heart mourns & is silent Soul grieving hear its lament.......whole poem was beautiful...but these lines were wow......Wonderfully narrated as usual.....thank you for sharing :)
Your poem is exactly like the picture posted.Full marks Mam.
Gloom descends on my heart I cant ever see a fresh start A fog of depression around Pushing me lower to the ground The fragrance that is specially you- -. so much of pain expressed. the desire to love and feel the nearness of the loved one. depths of gloom....... pain. conquer yourself and your dark thoughts. thankyou tony
This life hides so much of pain. At unexpected moments, it descends down and enslaves our heart. However hard we try to wrest ourselves free, the ropes tighten around our neck strangulating and drowning us into the depths of gloom. If we learn to divert our mind into some pleasurable activities, we can experience relief and to a great extent conquer our dark thoughts! Very poignantly presented!
Wowwww. Wonderful. I can feel your pain n gloom. Every line of this poem touches the heart's depths. And a smooth, even flow of words makes it such a great read. Loved it.10 many many times.
[...]Not finding you near me Breaks me apart slowly As tear roll down My senses drown Gloom descends on my heart[...] Brilliant and relatable lines Arzoo.. A very fine poem.. Thank you for sharing.10/10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A life without love, a body without soul and a mind without thought - - - - - You clubbed all in one pack - Awesome poem....Loved it, Aarzooji.....10++++