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Gilbert Tapales

(Jan.24,1985 / Manila, Philippines)

gloomy


dark cloud is forming inside my life
another storm approached no where to hide
freezing breeze of the storm stings in my life
fogs and rains now blocking my sight

i'm cold and drenched on pain and sorrow
haunting me to death like theres no tomorrow
rain hits me like millions of arrow
wild roar of thunder laughing at my sorrow

numbness then struck on my flesh and bone
in fighting this storm i'm all alone
my mind shouts'she's gone now, don't go on'
this storm turns my heart into a hard stone

Submitted: Monday, January 08, 2007
Edited: Tuesday, December 21, 2010
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