Treasure Island

doug bentley


GO: Recreation Of The Solar System


In epochs past, when this clouded planet
was still cloaked in crystal firmament,
every star orders of magnitude brighter,
night lighter, day dazzling, climate temperate,

Saturn reigned. His halo regal, celestial,
from royal ring, fifth from sun, shone brighter
by far than now, diadem of solar system.
Brute Jupiter, from reaches further flung

than Pluto now plies, was tossed by dark star out,
even now retracing shadowy path, returning.
Then there was war, for, Jupiter loosed,
set course to conquer planets’ pride, Saturn.

Neptune and Uranus, titans, first wall of defence,
threw up their shields, their moons, hurling them
in massed charge against the invading intruder.
Then Pluto was torn from Neptune’s arm, stripped free

to wander. Neptune flipped over on his back. Uranus
put up stoic fight but, battle momentum to mighty
Jupiter, even he bowed before conquering invader, now
sweeping forth, unobstructed, to claim solar system crown.

Saturn, sensing end of his reign, to avert ruin
of weaker children, abdicated, fled to further orbit.
Spectacle lit up all the firmament. A dragon devoured
the sky. Mars, panicked, froze. Earth reeled. Your moon

spun in its socket. Every planet was pierced. Then,
jealous Jupiter, settling on throne, lit up asteroid belt
like the fourth of July. Now, in spite of comet shield
and string of moons strung like chain of bells one tap

can set all tolling, uneasy sits Jupiter’s crown.
A watcher, he waits for return of his father.
Your conquering king is just an old Oedipus.
So don’t invoke his order, nor any planet’s grace.

By brute force the throne was taken, and that might
is no power with me, nor can any planet claim
my allegiance. The gift of grace comes from higher order.



This is a soliloquy from my theater script 'GO', a full-length absurdist play, modified for this format. Based on a combination of a few obscure ancient legends and some rather wild modern speculations, the speech here describes how our very puzzling solar system may have come to be what it is today.

Submitted: Saturday, November 02, 2013
Edited: Monday, April 14, 2014

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Topic(s): dramatic monologue

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

GO [ISBN: 978-1484880494] is available in paperback at Amazon websites worldwide, major online retailers and bookstores including Barnes & Noble, Bowker Books and Indie Bound, libraries and academic institutions worldwide through the Ingram Content Group and Baker & Taylor, as well as NACSCORP in the USA.

GO is also available in most digital formats at major online retailers and ebookstores worldwide, including Amazon Kindle, Apple iBooks, Barnes & Noble Nook, Kobo Books, WH Smith, Diesel eBook Store, Chapters/Indigo Canada, FNAC France, Livraria Cultura Brazil, Flipkart India, and Smashwords, and is free of charge to libraries worldwide through Baker & Taylor Axis 360.

Comments about this poem (GO: Recreation Of The Solar System by doug bentley )

Enter the verification code :

There is no comment submitted by members..

PoemHunter.com Updates

New Poems

  1. Do without It, Anirudh Rawat
  2. Don't Be Afraid, Lilly Emery
  3. Be, Andy Caldwell
  4. Tree saplings., Gangadharan nair Pulingat..
  5. Thank You, Tandin Dorji
  6. May Peace Prevail, Cathy Hodgson
  7. Baldy Bert, Von Kimball Barney
  8. Heartbreak Girl, Anirudh Rawat
  9. Too Many Women, David Lewis Paget
  10. RESULT: THE LAW OF CAUSE AND EFFECT, Dominic George

Poem of the Day

poet Sir Walter Raleigh

EVEN such is Time, that takes in trust
Our youth, our joys, our all we have,
And pays us but with earth and dust;
   Who in the dark and silent grave,
...... Read complete »

   

Member Poem

Trending Poems

  1. 04 Tongues Made Of Glass, Shaun Shane
  2. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  4. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  5. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  6. Invictus, William Ernest Henley
  7. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  8. No Man Is An Island, John Donne
  9. Gray Room, Wallace Stevens
  10. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]