Hit your ball as hard as you can
the poles are firm in its place
only a guard is moving around
to safe guard the place
you can hit a goal
just strive
hard.
without trying hard we cannot achieve any thing and i think it is a message for all, well-written poem
Yes, only hard work pays off. There is no alternative to that... Thanks for sharing..
A wonderful blank verse! Thanks for sharing.....................................10/10
setting a goal in life and hitting it hard to achieve.......... a poem of determination.. thank u dear poet. tony
To safe guard the place! ! With the muse of love. Thanks for sharing.
Brief and motivational, .....That no matter the obstacle you got to achieve your objective.Thus the saying where there is a gap(will) there is away.
Good depiction of what it takes to achieve one's goal - determination, perseverance... Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and insightfully penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Darren. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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I would like to translate this poem
just strive hard. for some hard, for some easy!