God's Share Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

God's Share

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Apart from what is your's and mine
there is a vast land left in
God's hand
Apart from what is your's and mine
there is a vast source of wealth left in
God's hand
These are to be shared between you and me
how we share....
God is waiting there to see
might might stand to win
right might loose and run
the stronger would push aside the weaker- and
God would'nt interfere....
how we share between you and me
God is only waiting there to see
God would'nt differentiate-
the might or the right
the bad or the good
GOD is only waiting up there to be OWNED
BY EVERYONE
YOU ME AND EVERYONE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kranthi Pothineni 17 February 2009

Fabulous flow of lines with very good message through out the poem...10

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C. P. Sharma 18 February 2009

It is neither mine nor thine, All in Him entwines. I love your poems, they are artistic and have a new dimension. Thanks for sharing. CP

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Greenwolfe 1962 18 February 2009

A good philosophical point. I love philosophy in poetry. This gives the poem a powerful message to send. We are all on loan to each other from God. Only some of us pay back our loan. GW62

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Sandhya S N 19 February 2009

The peom hinds towards the greed of man great Sandhya

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Rajaram Ramachandran 20 February 2009

In the material world, God has left it to the mankind to decide themselves. Only in the spiritual world, he decides according to each one's merit. What you say is correct.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

'God is only waiting there to see God would'nt differentiate- the might or the right the bad or the good' Nice poem with spiritual feelings

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Sandra Martyres 17 May 2009

A thought provoking philosphical piece Samanyan...that God is both universal and fair...10

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Ency Bearis 13 May 2009

An impressive write..its true GOD should be fair...but HE knows it should be fair just trust on HIM.

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Naidz Ladia 13 May 2009

regardless of religion, we have only one GOD..the only creator and the only almighty..HE is watching us..HE is fair to everybody, HE treats us equally..naizz

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Lynda Robson 23 February 2009

A lovely read telling us that God is here for us all, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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