Going Poem by Smoky Hoss

Going

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The road
With its load,
And so the path
Granting its wrath-
Is the trail
So bitterly frail,
Yet, always does the street
Give a hearty greet-
For along this way
Comes both work and play,
Always moving and knowing
You cannot cease the going-
Life will not stop or slow
Only and ever continuing on the go,
To where the lane
Stakes its final claim-
Through life the human-highway ever flowing,
Into eternity, we all are going.

Thursday, November 3, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matt Mooney 07 November 2011

Great poem with a good title.It pulls us up short and we take notice of where we are 'going'.10. 'To where the lane Stakes its final claim'.

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Cosmic Dreamer 07 November 2011

Even though we travel the same road so few of us take the time to smile and wave at the other... Your poem is truth and beauty...

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Eric Cockrell 06 November 2011

keep following the path, and hold your flame high! well done!

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Andrew Blakemore 03 November 2011

So true, we are all heading in the same direction into eternity. Excellent poetry.

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