Treasure Island

Luana Del Lobo


Gold Mirror...


It has been to long
Since I dare to enter the mirror
And see myself
Plain as I am

When we put our index finger
In that transparent reflection
It might be cold though
It's our freezing sensation
It's our frosty cover

We must place our hand
Not in silver
But in the gold of our minds
We must look at ourselves
Not from the outside
But within!

Submitted: Saturday, August 02, 2014

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  • Sandra Feldman (8/11/2014 3:46:00 PM)

    We make up our Exteriors with so many beauty products but most people find it maybe too much trouble to look for
    the beauty that's within, which is what really makes you human. Your poetic advise should be followed by all.
    Beautifully done poem, worded in spiritual gold. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (8/11/2014 11:32:00 AM)

    when looking in the mirror be sure to take the time to look within to see the true person beauty lies within good imagery (Report) Reply

  • Ed Nigma (8/6/2014 8:12:00 PM)

    Silence is golden but not in this case you sung this poem beautifully. You and the mirror are one. Speaks a positive message that all should pay attention to, beauty fades but who you are will always remain in the hearts and minds of those that you touch. This poem evoked the scene from the matrix when Neo pressed his finger into the liquid mirror as it crawled across his skin and was cold. Nicely done (Report) Reply

  • Monk E. Biz (8/2/2014 9:29:00 AM)

    And Gold we all are
    no matter the covering
    the sooner the better
    we make this discovering!

    I loved your work here! (Report) Reply

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