Gone Poem by Nicole Delong

Gone



Suddenly it hurts the most
the memories that i hold so close
i stand with tears inside my eyes
reminded of our sad goodbyes
i stand here in the rain
feeling so much pain
the world seeming to fall apart
as a hole emerged inside my heart
you put up such a fight
that very difficult night
i never wanted it to be so
but you were ready to go
i tried to hold my strength
as you took your final breath
i miss you every day
its hard to be okay

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence George Craddock 20 March 2024

p2 in winter here in a few months, when I have a warm fire going, a shall read all your poems one night; it is nice to have something to look forward to. Enjoy your days there.

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Terence George Craddock 20 March 2024

p1 I loved the depths sensitivity honesty of this poem, I wanted to express my appreciation; reading well written poetry is a precious experience;

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Terence George Craddock 20 March 2024

Your poem 'Gone' is a beautifully written heart tearing poem, encompassing the bitter agony of a heart tearing farewell. Power to your ink : )

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