Thanks for the warm smiles,
The sweetest of care
The words that opened our mind
You taught well, they made us wise
The beauty locked in your heart
Touched hundreds of lives
Your laughter, the love
It brought joy we never had
The moments shared will satisfy
Many hearts until it's time
Let all mortal souls take note
Whiles tears water like rain
Behind earthly door
Are the pools of darkness
Waiting to wet their chest
Like a bird he flies
To God's celestial shores
Free from earthly chores
His soul, now waits
In God beautiful place
Let sweet memories
Wet our heads whiles sorrowful
Tears bounce off our face
If love could save lives
Your hearts wouldn't cry
The sad song good bye.
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i have to close my eye, just to see you; i have to keep my wings for you to fly... i have to hold my breathe just to let you live....all are just an entity to remember of your poem....excellent lines that create your wonderful poem....you shared rainbow to our lives.....thank you...a 10 + for you...
you visualize the scene very well, your usage of clear and vivid images is powerful and the words you chose are just perfect, the poem flows smoothly, really simple and deep
An excellent write, reads like a dedication of deep respect..wonderful imagery
The saddest word 'Goodbye' in the heart vocabulary. You spelled that warmly.
Glory unto smile and sorrow And to God too Let it be vibe bon voyage 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
This is such a beautiful poem....a very touching good bye...10++
Let sweet memories Wet our heads whiles sorrowful Tears bounce off our face If love could save lives Your hearts wouldn't cry The sad song good bye. It was a sweet n yet sorrowful gdbye but still love is in there I love tis last few sentence best. the...sad song....gdbte
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'If love could save lives Your hearts wouldn't cry'...if this is true then many hearts wouldn't cry....nicely penned...