i never say good-bye
is always see you later..
Dad when you left
i never thought
you was gonna leave forever..
why did you leave us?
& why you didn't care?
i was the only brown one
you called me your little bear..
but now you gone forever
left with no signs
Give me one minute
let me say my good-byes!
steve, i can see your hurt.it happens to allof us that we lose our dad and mom at one point of time.a good bye might look like a final parting, in physical sense.but in reality, the soul never dies.it takes another form.so youshould think your dad is some where, still loving you and taking care of you.i found it a loving poem, for your dad.thanks for sharing.
this poet really fill our hearts i was the only brown one you called me your little bear.. but now you gone forever left with no signs
this one really touched my heart it was well writen and very thought out great job
i am enjoying my time while going through your poems.....this poem was touching! ! i give it10
yeah.//... your poems are sort of very poignant indeed.. you keep that aspect through out.. nice reading your poems.. i ll see you soon with love shan
You had a dad Who showed you love And did not hide It is the care we show The love we say we have When alive which matter More than the goodbye His blessings will stay Forever with you! Angel
a touching poem....and you expressed it will your love to your Dad...nice write...10 (see my poem ' Always ' let me see if it will touch your heart too)
A lesson in this too. Life's teaching us....constantly. Cheers. Subroto
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
at times even one goodbye..symbolises a glint of hope a goodbye is much better than 'no' goodbye!