Good Bye - Orginal Poem by Sophia Smith

Good Bye - Orginal

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You said you would love me
You said this was true
But now, matal bars is all I can see
I had no clue.
That you, of all people, would leave me this way.
You and I were so happy together.
When you found me, I was a stray.
But now you leave me in this cold winter weather.
You told me you were my friend,
And that forever I would be yours.
But now our friendship has come to a dead-end.
My coat covered in soars.
You just left me to die.
And you did not even say good-bye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
''king'' Troy Hazel 23 April 2008

this poem is one of the best poems i've read. GREAT. ''KING''

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Kye Kurion 19 April 2008

Ohh, abandonment is hard to deal with, very well conveyed though.

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