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Good morning!
Mmmm, milky fog
in province,
sleepy crow of a cock,
dizzy crickets
in the grass
Take your morning
gown and join me
on the terrace to
watch the dawn,
yet in a veil.
Old peasants say,
in foggy mornings like this
God comes
to the Earth
to make incognito visits.
Sofia, the 18.06.2008
onelia avelar
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Mark Nwagwu (11/8/2008 4:48:00 PM)
Oh, how much I loved this, Onelia: take your morning gown and join me on the terrace to watch the dawn yet in a veil - yes that's when God pays us a visit incognito to stir our hearts to fly upwards and meet him in mid-air that he may slowly bring us back to earth to be bathed in the fresh dews of gardens in delight.
Oh, this is so good.
Mark |
Palas Kumar Ray (10/10/2008 2:54:00 PM)
Wonderful imagery, picturesque depiction of a dawn smeared with firm beleief make this poem truly vivid.
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