Goodbye Poem by Nosheen Irfan

Goodbye

Rating: 4.4


He looked over his shoulder
And smiled goodbye
I didn't know it at the time
It meant nothing but a smile
I imprisoned it in my mind
Drew from it in low times
For years I held it inside
Like a pretty, precious find
For I believed not
A smile could carry poison
For I dreamed not
A smile could spell doom.


Nosheen Irfan © 2015
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Friday, November 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 18 August 2017

A plesant smile is a reflection of a lovely heart. Nosheen Irfan, one of the greatest poets at PH has so beautifully painted this thought that it touches our hearts immediately.

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Norah Tunney 31 March 2017

I love the image of the first two lines, looking behind smiling goodbye. An innocent enough gesture. Until the discovery that a smile could carry poison, a smile could spell doom. I remember a man I loved turning into a cold stranger and he still had a smile on his face, his smile spelt doom.A sad and beautiful poem thank you Nosheen 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 August 2016

For years i held it inside me! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Manonton Dalan 07 January 2016

I could see it in my mind

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Souren Mondal 13 November 2015

'For I believed not A smile could carry poison For I dreamed not A smile could spell doom' A beautiful poem and a wonderful finale.. Thank you so much for sharing...

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Nosheen Irfan 14 November 2015

Thank u for appreciation, Mondal.

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