Goodbye Poem by Kylee Bartz

Goodbye

Rating: 4.0


Last night, it all ended.
My life seems like it should be over.
I was only kidding.
I didnt know I could harm anybody.
Now I know though.
I will never do that again.
Because I did,
He said it was over.
He said goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adrian Cordova 22 July 2010

Simple and straight to the point, yet there is something missing, like you wanted to say more but didnt know how.... an 8

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Some goodbyes can be so harsh. Bruises the heart...but time does heal. Short but good!

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Nimal Dunuhinga 26 May 2010

Sad indeed..........everything we touch ends with sorrow?

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Ashley grosnickle 24 May 2010

sadness, we hate when it is over

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Iron Panda 23™ 12 May 2010

=(sadnesss

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Kylee Bartz

Kylee Bartz

Attica, New York
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