Goodbye (R.I.P.) Poem by Susan St.

Goodbye (R.I.P.)



far away
far away from us
till the day
which will return to past
we will remember
and never forgot
that smile
how long it's lasts

far away
but maybe not that far
every day
we looking for new star
on the sky
but there is still a scar
which will never fade away

far away
no you're not that far
we have no strenght to blame
the monster
humbled waiting for justice
how this is happend
there's no answer to this
we live with hope
that you'll rest in peace

goodbye...

i don't speak english very well, so i would like to please for help if i make mistakes somewhere... cuz it's important to me to write this in right way. tnx in advance =)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angela Vizueta 04 March 2012

you dont need to speak well or write well either it come from your heart that matters most.

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