Gps Of Life Poem by M.J. Lemon

Gps Of Life

Rating: 5.0


Atlas shrugged causing
us to roll down his back

making us land in one
great puddle of sweat

after passing through
one giant crack

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 03 April 2023

What an ingenious poem about global warming, hole in the ozone layer, heat waves, flooding and earthquakes. Sounds like the prophecies in The Bible. The only way that Atlas can keep holding up the earth on his shoulders is if our prayers reach God!

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M.J. Lemon 11 April 2023

Thank you so much Richard, I indeed had global warming in mind. I also thought of Ayn Rand, and of someone who might offer that author a certain salute. Combing these three elements, I came up with this poem. Thanks again, my friend.

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Loved this brilliant write. Top score and MyFavouritePoems

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M.J. Lemon 11 April 2023

Thank you so very much! And thank you for adding to myfavourites.

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Ricky Mangathen 04 April 2023

Wonderful poem. Liked it very much you raised very important issue here.

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M.J. Lemon 11 April 2023

Thank you so very much, Ricky. Much appreciated!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 April 2023

With prayers that we all do not fall into the crack. Top marks + to my favourite

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 April 2023

I agree with Richard. The only way Atlas can continue holding the earth on his shoulders is through prayers to God.

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M.J. Lemon 11 April 2023

Thank you so much, Geeta. I just hope Atlas' back doesn't give out!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 04 April 2023

A brilliant poem Mark. The GPS of life! A remarkable title and descrition to in succinct words.

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