Great White Halls Poem by Kevin Carney

Great White Halls



I walk down the great white halls…
So clean and pure they blind the eyes.
Never have I seen anything like it before.
So much the silence…
The quiet and tranquility in the great light.
So cold and yet so warm I feel.
Sense and time no longer the need.
Floating, an airy feel to the air around.
Solitude, the feeling yet a comfort all around.
The dream of dreams showing me the way…
No longer the need to want, what a feeling indeed.
I walk past you all; it was like I didn’t care.
It’s not that I am being callous, it’s just where I am at.
No need to even shed a tear…
All my trials and tribulations disappear as I reach the bright light.
Where is the place, it’s like I have never seen?
The pressure of my emotions seems to vanish here.
It’s such a place I never want to leave.
I look around and realize I never could…
It’s all right I wouldn’t want to any way.
It’s here I am and I never want to go back.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bert Bell 04 November 2010

A great, well-expressed idea, Kevin. You have something very lovely going on here. Imagery is great and some other nice textures that pulled me right into it. Nice poem.10

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