Greiving Suicide Poem by Monica Rose
Greiving Suicide
One normal day he just died
He left a note in his hand
To his first love
Who was me
He said he loved me
Just couldn't take the pain anymore
The scars all over his body
Proved he wasn't lying.
My heart sank when I saw him
Lifeless, there on the floor
Blood was still pouring
From his heart I once loved
Just remember I will always love you...
Later that week:
A funeral was held
I was the last one to leave
I knelled beside the casket
Said I loved him
Kissed my hand
Touched his pale cold lips
Let tears roll down my cheeks
Watched him get enclosed
Into the darkness
Let him head into the light
May you rest in peace...
i'll just leave this to my thoughts upon the short story...thanks again ~^..^
WOW! That was so intense, so heartfelt. Can such sadness be beautiful?
That was INTENSE. A wonderful heartfelt story. Def my fav. so far...let's see what else is out there.
Its a very sad story and i think you should consider making it into a full length story if you havent already. If you do post it, please
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/1/2024 3:04:57 AM # 1.0.0.1119
If this really happened, I'm so sorry you had to witness something like that. This poem alone makes me wanna cry. I can't imagine how bad it could have made you feel. I like how you don't hold back, and you just let everything out.