Haiku - 28 Boat Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 28 Boat

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the sound of water
flowing continuously
a little boat sails

Saturday, November 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 15 November 2015

gently over the waves we go thanks Asim

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Seema Jayaraman 15 November 2015

lovely haiku.. the boat I can feel myself on the boat.. thanks

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Chuy Amante 14 November 2015

the sound of a leak sharks will like the taste of me I prefer land mate

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Kelly Kurt 14 November 2015

Beautiful! That is a true haiku!

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