Treasure Island

sathya narayana

(12-06-1958 / Nellore, Andhra Pradesh)

HAIKU COLLECTION II


Soaked moon
In lake waters
Melted by dawn

Moon then clouds
Moon then clouds moon then clouds
Monsoon’s hide and seek

first a thud at night
then roiling sounds of waters
Found moon in our well

Spring garden
Albino chameleon
Sans action

Hill in drizzle
Like a dark beauty
In see-through nighty

Sun through new green leaves
On night formed puddles
Flash, flash, flash

Rain doctor helps
Pregnant earth deliver
Baby saplings

Submitted: Saturday, August 15, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, September 29, 2009

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  • Maia Padua (8/27/2009 1:07:00 AM)

    very marvelous collection of haiku...
    words flows with depth...
    really great..
    words pictured out a wonderful and vivid pictures...
    I love this as always...
    10+++


    Lovelots,

    Maia (Report) Reply

  • Vinod Ak (8/26/2009 8:25:00 AM)

    'Rain Doctor Helps.....' is a marvellous imagination and expression! Awesome! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Catrina Heart (8/25/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    I'm spell bound with your haiku collection my friend............fabulous! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (8/24/2009 4:09:00 PM)

    An exquisite collection. You paint
    poems with deft fingers. My favorite one
    is about the moon in the well. it
    is perfectly enchanting.

    Kind wishes,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Ben Gieske (8/23/2009 4:14:00 PM)

    I also like to take my haiku and put them together to weave a theme. I like this one above the rest:

    Soaked moon
    In lake waters
    Melted by dawn (Report) Reply

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