sathya narayana

Rookie - 69 Points (12-06-1958 / Nellore, Andhra Pradesh)

HAIKU COLLECTION II


Soaked moon
In lake waters
Melted by dawn

Moon then clouds
Moon then clouds moon then clouds
Monsoon’s hide and seek

first a thud at night
then roiling sounds of waters
Found moon in our well

Spring garden
Albino chameleon
Sans action

Hill in drizzle
Like a dark beauty
In see-through nighty

Sun through new green leaves
On night formed puddles
Flash, flash, flash

Rain doctor helps
Pregnant earth deliver
Baby saplings

Submitted: Saturday, August 15, 2009
Edited: Tuesday, September 29, 2009

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  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (8/28/2009 12:24:00 PM)

    bravo superb writes.................and thanks for the compliments (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Maia Padua (8/27/2009 1:07:00 AM)

    very marvelous collection of haiku...
    words flows with depth...
    really great..
    words pictured out a wonderful and vivid pictures...
    I love this as always...
    10+++


    Lovelots,

    Maia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Ak (8/26/2009 8:25:00 AM)

    'Rain Doctor Helps.....' is a marvellous imagination and expression! Awesome! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Ak (8/26/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    Splendid and inspiring Haiku collection! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (8/25/2009 12:53:00 AM)

    I'm spell bound with your haiku collection my friend............fabulous! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (8/24/2009 4:09:00 PM)

    An exquisite collection. You paint
    poems with deft fingers. My favorite one
    is about the moon in the well. it
    is perfectly enchanting.

    Kind wishes,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 190 Points Seema Chowdhury (8/23/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    nice collection of Haiku. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (8/23/2009 4:14:00 PM)

    I also like to take my haiku and put them together to weave a theme. I like this one above the rest:

    Soaked moon
    In lake waters
    Melted by dawn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Varanasi Ramabrahmam (8/18/2009 11:03:00 AM)

    Nice collection of poems about nature. Liked them much (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Seema Aarella (8/16/2009 11:57:00 PM)

    Spell binding images of nature.....highly exotic and beautiful haiku's! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Indira Babbellapati (8/15/2009 11:27:00 AM)

    hill, earth, rain, moon, clouds, leaf...your haikus brought them all to my back yard! (Report) Reply

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