Suntanned revelers
Frolic in raucous delight
Jesus impaled sweats
Your haiku deserves my senryu: Wet as sweat can be rode the treadmill calorie soaking up the free. if it does not measure up to your humbling homage to Him.
A good haiku showing the contrast at Easter, 10 from me Lyndaxx
The contrast is tragic. A world unaware. Food for thought. As always, Sandra
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I imagine them suntanned with their heads in the sand. You bring the contrast of fun and loud indifference to a holy prophet's torture. Karin Anderson