The sound that the rain
makes while beating on my roof
lullaby to me
The rain drops falling nd the lullaby. very nice comparison dear poet. tony
The music is even more beautiful when the rain is a drizzil. Thanks for your kind words
A wonderful three liner poem. Great imagery. We can hear the rythym of the rain.
" Traditional Haiku Structure There are only three lines, totaling 17 syllables. The 1st & 3rd lines have 5 syllables. The second line is 7 syllables. Punctuation and capitalization need not follow the rigid rules used in structuring sentences" i think you have 22 syllables. [in the U.S. aluminium is aluminum (one syllable less!) ] I say this is not haiku, but it's an ok poem. which ear hears " music" ? just one? ? bri ;)
" Traditional Haiku Structure There are only three lines, totaling 17 syllables. The 1st & 3rd lines have 5 syllables. The second line is 7 syllables. Punctuation and capitalization need not follow the rigid rules used in structuring sentences" i think you have 22 syllables. [in the U.S. aluminium is aluminum (one syllable less!) ] I say this is not haiku, but it's an ok poem. which ear hears " music" ? just one? ? bri ;)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Music to ear, great write
Thank you for you kind comment