Haiku Memory Loss Haiku Poem by Christina Chin
Haiku Memory Loss Haiku
no more disk space
grandma deletes all
no more disk space grandma deletes all, ...... the poem finally sounds pangs in heart and mind, extraordinarily you have penned it, dear poetess, congratulations, thanks a lot and welcome here to PoemHunter, I hope your mighty pen will publish more famous poems
Thanks very much for your kind compliments and encouragement! . Very much appreciated
very nice Haiku. in short you convey a lot....... this i s a special ability. thank u dear Christina
Much appreciated and thanks very much for kind compliments, Dr.tony!
You are short of syllables for a Haiku. Usually it's 3 lines. Line 1 has 5 syllables, Line 2 has 7 syllables and Line 3 has 5 syllables for a total of 17 syllables in the poem. You have the following: no more disk space grandma deletes all As you can see it's 4 syllables on the first line and 5 syllables on the second line. Total 9 syllables. You will have to add a few more words. Hope this helps. : -)
Thanks very much, Tamara! I appreciate your suggestions very much, yes, that is if I write formal 5-7-5. My haiku are three or less lines. If 5-7-5 its coincidental. Often I write two lines I also write monostitch. Thank you very much again. Your comment is very much appreciated. Have a great day, warm regards. Christina
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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