Haiku No.19 Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Haiku No.19

Rating: 4.2


seashore's dark tunnel
refuge makes this hole a home
eyes of crab watching

Monday, November 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: home,seaside
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 25 November 2016

You win on two counts.. crabs and seashores. Loved it

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M Asim Nehal 22 November 2016

Crafty one, it is more a senryu, in fact on the borderline. A perfect 10++++

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Nosheen Irfan 22 November 2016

Very insightful. A gem of a piece. A hole can be a home if it provides you shelter, physically n emotionally. A10

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Seamus O Brian 22 November 2016

Thank you, Nosheen!

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