Haiku No.20 Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Haiku No.20

Rating: 4.5


this leaf is trembling
the last golden sentinel
against winter's chill

Tuesday, December 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: winter,season
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 14 June 2017

oops! i realized right after that is trembling would be the complete verb. anyway, great word choice, neal. -g

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Glen Kappy 14 June 2017

and what can one leaf-sentinel do against the brunt of winter? i like this, neal. trembling is a great adjective here with its double meaning. hoping this finds you well in all ways, glen

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