Haiku - Petals Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - Petals

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petals are falling
greed in humans is growing
life is declining

Haiku - Petals
Wednesday, March 8, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 09 March 2023

The sweet fragrance of the petals is masking the pungent odour of human greed.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 09 March 2023

this haiku is wonderfully beautiful bravo! ! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 March 2023

Beautiful, absolutely a beautiful three-liner! I can see the fate of the petals....well done my friend!

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Martinez Salotori 09 March 2023

Contrast lines, nice work, we humans are greedy anyways.

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Poetic Sky 09 March 2023

Wow, so goooood, I cam see petals falling.

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