Haiku ~ Ripples Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku ~ Ripples

Rating: 5.0


a small piece of stone
makes ripples in massive lake
like worry destroys

Saturday, April 16, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: worries
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 16 April 2022

The lake has changed forever, and the stone, and the ripples.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 16 April 2022

My worries go away when I do see those ripples also Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 April 2022

Worry destroys calmness and it triggers related problems. Brilliant write succinctly expressed. Superb imagery.

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Phyllis Strong 17 April 2022

Worrying causes stress marks. Prayer lifts the weight of worry.

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Nabakishore Dash 17 April 2022

worry is small piece of stone in the massive lake of thoughts to rust our body.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 16 April 2022

Your wonderful imagery gives a fascinating depiction of worry!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 April 2022

A wonderful haiku! Neither I look at the stone nor at the massive lake right now. I put the spotlight on that ripples! A brilliant Haiku....Top score!

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