Haiku Tears Poem by Ken e Hall

Haiku Tears

Rating: 5.0


Sky bends to kiss earth
Leaving tears so crystal pure
To consume the dry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Queeny Gona 06 June 2015

Beautiful imagery sir Sky kissing earth with crystal pure tears to consume the dry! I like the way it has been depicted sir!

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Jessica Jemima 15 January 2009

Haiku is beautiful. So is this - thanks, a great metaphor. Perhaps I'm wrong, but is it not supposed to have 5 syllables in the last line? =)

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Ken e Hall

Ken e Hall

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