A walk in the sand
Seagulls fly high overhead
The wind in my hair.
Jayne Louise Davies
So much action and beauty in this lovely haiku. Much enjoyed.
Like a scene from Jonathan Livingston Seagull. Or Woodstock. Such a great feeling of freedom captured in this poem!
Beautiful brevity, feels as if we were there, with also the wind in our hair. Enjoyed, thank you!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
With those seagulls flying overhead, you'll soon have more than wind in your hair! Enjoyed reading this. Five stars.
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I can just picture the scene Ron : ) lol Thanks for the stars! x