Haiku … The Beach Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Haiku … The Beach

Rating: 5.0


A walk in the sand
Seagulls fly high overhead
The wind in my hair.


Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 14 April 2023

With those seagulls flying overhead, you'll soon have more than wind in your hair! Enjoyed reading this. Five stars.

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😀😃😄

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Jayne Louise Davies 15 April 2023

I can just picture the scene Ron : ) lol Thanks for the stars! x

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 April 2023

Beautifully inked. Loved it. Thanks.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 April 2023

So much action and beauty in this lovely haiku. Much enjoyed.

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Richard Wlodarski 17 April 2023

Like a scene from Jonathan Livingston Seagull. Or Woodstock. Such a great feeling of freedom captured in this poem!

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Sandra Feldman 16 April 2023

Beautiful brevity, feels as if we were there, with also the wind in our hair. Enjoyed, thank you!

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Pallavi Tripathi 15 April 2023

Wonderful write.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 15 April 2023

Beautifully put Jayne

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Jayne Louise Davies 15 April 2023

Thank you everyone. Much appreciated x

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