'Haiku' The Pool Of The River Poem by KIRTI SHAH

'Haiku' The Pool Of The River

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Like or not,
wave not back
Life
*
Sound remain
Life of
Flowing water
*
like or not
wave support
water

*
whirlpool
smoothly move
Conditional life
*
Deep calm
Shallow water
noisy
*
Sink deeply fear
Shallow tuberculosis
Rowing
*
Not diver not swimmer
Fear flux
Water
*
Something hit
Does smooth
Edge, stone
*
Fear the pool of death
Close secrete
Nature
*
Floats death
Dead floats
Water deeply

Sunday, September 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 06 September 2015

Sorry, , , , a haiku should be 5-7-5 syllables....Do try again as haikus are good poetry.

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