Haiku/Variation 2 Poem by Art Gatti

Haiku/Variation 2



Graceful swans rise from
golden lake
pink flamingoes
regard my bald head

Saturday, June 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: laughter,like,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I thought that this was a valid variation on my previous haiku, even if I only did change one word. I think Basho would have used that word first
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