Cold winter morning:
Robins eagerly waiting,
A world of struggle.
To overcome adverse weather, it needs a preparedness.... so is the struggle... well done.
Only a struggle can keep us saved from hard weather condition.Brilliant.
Beautiful crisp poem. Brevity adds to its beauty. Marvellous Haiku. Congratulations.Top score
Every day is a struggle. A winter is all the more. May I invite you to read my poem A Winter in Delhi….
Robins eagerly waiting, ........! A world of struggle....yes, I think it so. A powerful haiku with great impact and influence! Top score.
A beautiful haiku dear David. I can feel both the cold and the struggle too.......10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Winter season has several inconveniences that come along with it. A wonderful haiku with great imagery.