abhimanyu kumar.s

Rookie - 84 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

Hard To Believe - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

Its very hard as rock
Soft as butter
To respect your teacher
To wish a teacher
May be its right
May not be its right.

Teachers are with variety
Personal variety, proffessional sequence
Thinking, Finding and Rewinding
This is how some are
Hardly difficult to respect
Softly to quite from teacher.

A teacher is ultimate
Supreme to any power
They are the over soul
Life ends or trends
By the immortal souls
Such teachers are rare.

May be you do with
Sometimes you don't
Prepositional elements can end
When a teacher of a kind
Like the catcher in the hell
Hard to believe such teachers.

Teacher is the only truth
He or She the only belief
Trust and belief the other name
When that trust itself is broken
From and by a teacher
Can you believe?
Am sure its hard to believe.

Wish and love and care
Must be submitted to a teacher
Surrendered with respect
Become subaltern under teacher.

Disciples are free from Karma
Liberated after their submission
Recieving with honour, love
Is the only Karma of a teacher.

She kicked me for submission
She insulted my wishes
She bombarded me for my Karma
Gave strong pain in my -.

Is She a teacher?
Is She a mother?
Is She should be regarded?
Is She should be rewarded?
Its hard to believe her.

No student forgive her
No one believe her
No one should wish her
I hope you wont.


Comments about Hard To Believe by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • Rookie Divya Divya B (11/15/2011 6:21:00 AM)

    she is not a teacher. she wont deserve for the title of teacher. i liked very much 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie lover of poetry sweet (11/9/2011 4:29:00 AM)

    a bitter full of thought. ya we should never respect those who don't deserve it. very good.10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie maka (kat) albarn (7/13/2011 7:40:00 AM)

    a little bit confused but other than that i like it. She seems like she deserves a lot of respect. Keep up the great poems (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jahrae Patterson (6/12/2011 2:59:00 PM)

    Blotchy...fragmented...and confusing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Pamuditha Zen Anjana (6/2/2011 10:19:00 AM)

    Genuine! ! ! ! Loved it! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 11, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, June 10, 2011


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