Hardly The Time Poem by josie iorianni

Hardly The Time

Rating: 3.8


For the first Couple years of my life,
I thought you the one
But I was wrong
I looked up to you my inspiration
But it’s hardly the time
For you on my mind

It’s not the time
For you to see me,
For you to be with me,
For you to hurt me
Your footsteps I used to follow
my heart left so hollow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rakhi Jayashankar 01 October 2008

a gr8 work a girl of 14 yrs of age

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Greenwolfe 1962 25 September 2008

This is a very shallow poem without much to offer I am afraid. GW62

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Ian Singer 23 September 2008

dude you are a good poet keep writing

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