Hateful Words (Please Rate Or Comment) Poem by chrissy arc

Hateful Words (Please Rate Or Comment)

Rating: 5.0


The lies you speak
They all reek.
You devil girl
You have come to destroy my world
With the twist of your curl.
Well I cast you out.
Out from which you came
Never to see your face again.
May god watch over my soul
For I want to lose control.
And bash your face into the floor
Watching all the blood and gore
Making your life cease to exsist
You’ve got me feeling so pissed

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Chrissy Arc 16 July 2008

For the readers of my poem. I apologize if I offended or frightened you with this poem. I would never hurt another human being. Sometimes my anger gets the best of me And writing is my therapy. I just hope the someone can take from my poem and relate

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Lucianne Fasolo 15 July 2008

I wouldn't call it candid at all... I hope you're speaking metaphorically, for your own good. :) Hateful words may not do any harm, but they're dangerous when they incite actions.

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Antonio Liao 15 July 2008

candid poem.. i like it... a ten

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