Hawaiian Island Coconuts Poem by R.Benjamin Abate

Hawaiian Island Coconuts



Waiting for you
To walk by
So they can let go
Of their lifeline
To fall upon
Your crown
& Destroy your kingdom-
“Mahalo”
Says
The palm tree as it dances
In the breeze after it hits
Its target like a
Stealth Bomber-
Innocent-
Yet, sly-
It dances on-
Awaiting its next
Victim-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 03 August 2013

a good write but I won't be walking under a coconut tree soon

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David Wood 19 July 2013

A delightful poem unless you are reading it under a palm tree! ! !

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Danny Draper 15 July 2013

A swaying dance of death no doubt, with so many fruit, they don't muck about. Good write with a great sense of humour and tropical who done it.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 July 2013

good poem, thanks, I invite you to read my poems and comment,

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