He Knocked At Poem by Neela Nath Das

He Knocked At

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I was in the deep domain of sleep
No dream reigned my closed eyes.
When the storm started was unknown.
I heard his voice- Open, open the door,
'I'm here your loving little bro.'
Four times he called.
First one was a request
And the rest two had the tone wrapped up
With the possessiveness, 'I'm yours bro, Why
Aren't you opening the door! ! '
I was in the realm of half consciousness

In middle of dead and alve.
When couldn't reply, his voice faded out.
He knocked to get in this world
Before leaving.
In the morning I saw the curtain of door
Tore in parts...

Thursday, June 29, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 07 December 2017

unconscious mind reminds our soul to keep the memory alive and console our self through dreams- thanks for sharing a touching frame of death

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 July 2017

Missing the loving brother. This is what happens when someone you love dearly and you lose him suddenly. Touching write. Liked it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2017

No dream regained in deep sleep. Eyes were closed an deep domain was observed. Unknown storm was started and voice was heard easily. Loving little brother was near. In the realm of half consciousness in middle of dead and alive, this was difficult to reply. Death was truth but really mysterious. Wonderful poem is very wisely crafted in smooth manner and shared here.....10

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