He Said Poem by Corrine Andros

He Said

Rating: 5.0


he said he loves me,
i said i love you,
but he said we could never be,
i said what shall i do,
he said to move on,
i said i don't want to,
he said to let all my love be gone,
i said i want to be with you,
he said he'll miss me,
i said don't leave,
he said let it be,
i said i will grieve,
he said goodbye,
i said do not lie,
he said i'm not,
i said it is not a good bye,
he said what a thought,
i said it was a lie,
he said nothing,
i said bye,
and he walked away,
that was all i had to say.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
... Sheila 18 April 2007

You truly captured the essence of that helpless moment when someone walks away.

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Sandra Fowler 17 April 2007

Very poignant and expressive. Take care, Corrine. Warmest regards, Sandra

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