Heartbreak Poem by Tiara Neal

Heartbreak



Heartbreak.
Something I know to much about.
Thinking you would never break my heart.
But sure enough you did with out a doubt.

Heartbreak.
What i wish to leave behind.
So here I am flashing back.
Hating that you use to be mine.

Heartbreak.
You left me crying.
Trying to recope.
You left me dying.

Heartbreak.
Gettin rid of the hate.
Using rubberbands.
My mistake.

Heartbreak.
Living in fear.
I dont want to die.
Thinking you cared.

Heartbreak.
I wish you only knew.
What you meant to me.
And how much i cared about you.

Heartbreak.
What you left me feeling.
Heartbreak.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Harskamp 17 September 2006

The structure was so bear...It kept me wanting more from each stanza. though I typically like more of a complex poem, one that makes me think, this wasn't so bad.

0 0 Reply
Preeti - is here! 16 May 2006

loved the simple words you used in this poem. hearbreak are part and parcel of life... Preets

0 0 Reply

Hey Tiara, that's a really powerful poem, some guys can be real cruel. But Try not 2 think about it, it's his loss. Keep writing, best wishes, from Rissa: -)

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success