-hell- Poem by Christopher Doddridge

-hell-

Rating: 5.0


My life is burning
It bursted out in flames
You asked me who told me
But i can't remember the names

My soul is on fire
The flames are orange and red
The smoke is rising higher
All the way up to my head

This place is so dark
But its hotter that the sun
I bet a rock would melt
And even a silve gun

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Harris 14 September 2009

You forgot the 'R' in sliver tho =P

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