Help Me... Poem by Dead Poetic

Help Me...

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Oh, Lord, take me away
Take me away this very day
I can’t stand the pain
Of my heart being slain
I’m not going to lie
I want to die
I want to die right now
As I take my final bow.

Please, someone save me
Or will you just let me be?
Two parts of me fight,
Both day and night
One wants to die, the other wants to live
But what other choice do I have to give?
Please let me live, please let grow,
I want to live, this you must know!

I don’t want to live, I want to break
Only I can know the decision I must make
I can die naturally
So everyone goes on happily
I can die all alone
Cause this thought is known.

Please save me,
Just let me be free!

You’re not free,
You’ll never be!


I will be free,
You’ll soon see,
As I kick you out
With not one pout

You have no power over me,
This you will see,
For the mind is much stronger
Than the physical wander…

Who can help me
Set my own self free?
I’m tired of being lonely,
I want a family…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kalpana Bhatt 15 October 2016

Let not the hope die let a flame always be there

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Elena Sandu 25 July 2011

A fight between heart and mind I suppose.. Yes, it is true I get them too, but both comes to agree that duty cannot set me free..So for me it is just a prayer: please love stay in my heart and let me share..Keep hope you can always have the freedom of an open heart..May a lovely family come soon to be. Good poem filled with raw pain and hopes..isnt life so?

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