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help me! (song)

Everyone is leaving me and I don’t know why
This lonely feeling makes me want to cry
And I don’t understand, I don’t understand why

Help me I need your help
I’m all alone and I can’t figure things out
And I’m so confused, I’m losing my mind
Please help me… help me

I lost the most important things that I needed in my life
And now all I have is pain and strife
I’m so angry and I don’t understand why

Help me I need your help
I’m all alone and I can’t figure things out
And I’m so confused, I’m losing my mind
Please help me… help me

Please help me I’m going crazy
I’m going insane
I don’t know what to do

Help me I need your help
I’m all alone and I can’t figure things out
And I’m so confused, I’m losing my mind
Please help me I need your help
I’m all alone and I can’t figure things out
And I’m so confused, I’m losing my mind
Please help me… help me

Cuz I can’t do this on my own
Please help me

Submitted: Monday, December 15, 2008
Edited: Friday, March 05, 2010

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  • Pamela Chalecka (9/30/2009 12:19:00 PM)

    Good rhymes..I can imagine the (help me) in the bacground (rapping)
    lol

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  • Vincent Toll(Happy To Have His Princess Back) ^_^ (4/13/2009 8:34:00 AM)

    Great poem. i really can relate to it because i have been in around the same situation. if you ever need someone im here though.

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  • true Little angel ...! ! ! (4/6/2009 8:49:00 AM)

    when we feel lonely we just have to look at the sun or the rainbow.... then such broken feelings will be gathered.... sweet poem/song! ! !

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  • Zachary Clark (3/12/2009 4:14:00 PM)

    Hey I love this poem! Keep it up though for a song don't it need more to it?

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  • Carol Rhodes (1/9/2009 7:14:00 PM)

    You have an easy way, a natural flow when it comes to releasing your emotions. Very nice. You keep your dedicated deliberate practice of writing and being involved with music and help will come! You'll be your own saviour. I run, exercycle, and hike in the park every day to maintain balance. The more sensitive you are, and you are, the more you need to move your bod. Smile at everyone and take in the healing smiles that are returned to you. Carol

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  • Anna jonson (1/9/2009 11:10:00 AM)

    waaaaaaaaaaw what a good lyrics for a song...waaaaaaaaaaaw...keep writing girl!

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  • Aaron Chalor Tate (1/7/2009 8:28:00 PM)

    I hear punk rock flow..

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  • Aaron Combs (12/17/2008 2:07:00 PM)

    It sounds, like an outry of a loner, such i can much relate to, goo write, though a song doesn't it need a chorus at least, or some type of stanza to represent verse?

    Good Write, Please comment my poems if you will please thanks! !

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  • Vinod Kumar (12/17/2008 10:55:00 AM)

    Dear Author, Good Art Work Thanks For Sharing, Praise the lord Merry `X`Mas and New year Wishes.

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