Helpless Poem by Bushra Hassan

Helpless

Rating: 5.0


Had the experience of hell again......
Again dropped myself to a bottomless pit.....
A pit which will remain unseen...
Unseen to the naked eye....
Far from the hearts of heartless peopl....
No hands their to reach my dead cordis.....
All i had der r pleasing and surprizing eyes....
Crying on my condition...
Gossiping about ma helpless soul...
I tried to raise ma voice...
Calm their surprise and
shout nothing to worry about i am fine.......

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I jus met an accidnt....n peopl around me were crying on ma condition
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 21 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Bushra. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Saadat Tahir 24 January 2013

like a squalid dreary dream in the pits of hollow realms... like a scene from a forgotten movie....ten thousand leagues under the netherworld... liked it nice flow u shd write more... blessings

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