Her Evening Poem by RIC BASTASA

Her Evening



her evening is noisy
all the words of the town invade her
ceaselessly

well i know of the reason
her man left her for another

younger and hot
like the night in the tropics

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Beckham 09 July 2010

The rhythmic pattern I trully enjoyed...Its like sipping fresh water from a spring! ! Nicely done

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